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Faded Smile by ~LoneWolf117:iconLoneWolf117:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


I took away your smile on your face
The look you have now is my own disgrace
If we met now like nothing ever happened, if you forget my past,
Would we fall in again just as fast?
If I was only yours and only yours once more
Could we hold it together and let our hearts soar?
My past in my cries
What we had in my eyes
It must be too late
The expression on your face shows my fate
Why I did what I did I’m still not sure
A memory was the only lure
I tried to tell you how sorry I was, for everything
But at least I tried, something.
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Author's Comments

anyother poem to someone who changed my life, if you read it you know who you are (hopefully)
again another sorry for everything poem next one isn't like that tho i promise :D
same style as my last one (which is my own style, lines 7and 8 can have the rhymed words switched and it'll have a new meaning, 2nd to last line is me being sorry for my mistakes and i make a hell of alot of em :( )

your smile was so beautiful..
sorry.. again..

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=Inuyasha1771 Feb 11, 2007, 9:26:12 PM
AWww..kehvihn...it's nice! I really like your poems, they are creative and expressive...SUperb words as usual! =3 It's a sad thought though =/

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~~ Whenever there is a beating, a parting is sure to follow. However, that parting need not last forever. ~~

"TEEEEEN I WANNA COME OVER YOUR HOOOOOOOOOOOOU--ZBZBZBBZBZBZBZBBZBTTTTTTTT"
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~Kainazo Feb 11, 2007, 9:27:11 PM
|3 ...Cute...and sad...arg *unable to say much* >_<

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Je vais te paperweighter à mort!
~Climber-Fans & ~Krazy4Karl

All hail ~Velpia
:iconlonewolf117:
~LoneWolf117 Feb 11, 2007, 9:37:41 PM
lol it happens :P
thanks for the fave :)

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Acta non Verba. :stormtrooper:
:iconlonewolf117:
~LoneWolf117 Feb 11, 2007, 9:40:13 PM
lol thanks, yea... but the next one wont be sad! :thumbsup:

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Acta non Verba. :stormtrooper:
:iconinuyasha1771:
=Inuyasha1771 Feb 11, 2007, 9:51:09 PM
:D well, that's good to hear ^_^ :manhug: GOod luck dawglit!

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~~ Whenever there is a beating, a parting is sure to follow. However, that parting need not last forever. ~~

"TEEEEEN I WANNA COME OVER YOUR HOOOOOOOOOOOOU--ZBZBZBBZBZBZBZBBZBTTTTTTTT"
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~BooFster Feb 12, 2007, 12:23:33 AM
Hm, confusing. Still cool i guess... @_@ weeee !
:iconlonewolf117:
~LoneWolf117 Feb 12, 2007, 7:22:30 AM
yep :P

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Acta non Verba. :stormtrooper:
:iconkainazo:
~Kainazo Feb 12, 2007, 2:01:37 PM
>_<''
You're welcome =]

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Je vais te paperweighter à mort!
~Climber-Fans & ~Krazy4Karl

All hail ~Velpia
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